When night falls
I can see my shadow on the wall
Which seems so tall
Yet it is just an illusion that people call
The room is so dark
So quiet that I can hear the distant dogs bark
I have never believed in luck
But I need some to make my mark
I thought I was able to have a sweet dream
Yet my rolling tears turned into a stream
I could not help it but to let out a silent scream
And I know it takes two to make a team
Why am I sufferring from this helplessness
Because of my selfishness
Because of my carelessness
And because of my undecidedness
3 comments:
man, your poems are good but i couldn not find the reason behind the grief...need some enlightenment here
Umm...
This poem is written cos I have nothing else better to write. Or maybe I have too much to write about that I decided not to write any. =)
To explain it in a simple way, the first verse/stanza is about expectations towards ownself. The second part is about career. The third part is about love. And the fourth part reflects the character and how it led to all the grief.
Is it clear enough?
By the way, this does not reflect my feelings, it is just creative writing. =)
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